According to http://www.nieuwsblad.be/economie/consument/sparen 
more and more people have problems paying back their loan. They get entangled in this situation because of the advertising which only shows the advantages of a loan, in that way they attract people who already are in debt. Therefore the government is starting a campaign that indicates the dangers of loaning money and they will also inaugurate more rigorous rules to protect the consumers. So think twice when you contract a loan, to make sure you don’t get in trouble.
Elaine Praet

more and more people have problems paying back their loan. They get entangled in this situation because of the advertising which only shows the advantages of a loan, in that way they attract people who already are in debt. Therefore the government is starting a campaign that indicates the dangers of loaning money and they will also inaugurate more rigorous rules to protect the consumers. So think twice when you contract a loan, to make sure you don’t get in trouble.
Elaine Praet
2 opmerkingen:
drop 'buying on the' in title
loanS
because advertising only shows ...
Full stop before 'in that way'
they attract: who are 'they'?
indicates --> warns for
loaning --> borrowing
inaugurate --> introduce
(GJ)
More stringent rules for hire-purchase system.
According to http://www.nieuwsblad.be/economie/consument/sparen
more and more people have problems paying back their loans. They get entangled in this situation because advertising only shows the advantages of a loan. In that way those advetising attract people who already are in debt. Therefore the government is starting a campaign that warns for the dangers of borrowing money and they will also introduce more rigorous rules to protect the consumers. So think twice when you contract a loan, to make sure you don’t get in trouble.
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