If your trust in banks is lost and you have chosen to keep your money home, then beware of burglars! Nowadays burglars don’t wait until it’s dark, they search for information about you and your habits and strike when you least expect it. These days burglars don’t really look for very expensive things, they are happy with laptops, mobile phones and so on. A good security system can be very helpful, cause when the burglars can’t get into your house within 4 minutes, they usually give up.
Dorien Loridan
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no comma after dark - use a colon; same after 'expensive things'
cause --> because
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Beware of burglars (correction)
If your trust in banks is lost and you have chosen to keep your money home, then beware of burglars! Nowadays burglars don’t wait until it’s dark: they search for information about you and your habits and strike when you least expect it. These days burglars don’t really look for very expensive things: they are happy with laptops, mobile phones and so on. A good security system can be very helpful, because when the burglars can’t get into your house within 4 minutes, they usually give up.
Dorien Loridan
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