Flemish people are worried about their money on the bank nevertheles they keep it on the bank. A research, in which 1000 Flemish people participated, shows that 56,9 % of these people are worried about their money but just 4,6 % of them put it away from the bank. Women, older people and people with a low level of education are more pessimistic about the whole situation. The research also shows that the majority is satisfied about the measures the government took concerning the financial problems.Meryem Özüak
Source: http://www.nieuwsblad.be/Article/Detail.aspx?ArticleID=GRD21JIUR
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Flemish people are worried about their money on the bank nevertheles [normally, you use 'nevertheless' to start a nex sentence] they keep it on the bank. A research [research is uncountable, so say 'Research has shown' or 'A research project has shown...], in which 1000 Flemish people participated, shows that 56,9 % [56.9%] of these people are worried about their money but just 4,6 % [4.6] of them put it [take it] away from the bank. Women, older people and people with a low level of education are more pessimistic about the whole situation. The research also shows that the majority is satisfied about the measures the government took concerning the financial problems.
Good flow, but mind the language issues (linking, uncountable nouns, difference between 1.0 and 1,000)
olaf
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